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RetroCarrot

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Don't take it the wrong way, but it feels like something is missing. Add some drums and a little more funk on that bass, and I'm sure you've got a winner on your hands.

Cacola responds:

but it's an ambient song

Oh my god! So relaxing!

The perfect studying music.

Pretty cool.

You missed some strings、but you did a splendid job、regardless。

Personally not a dubstep person myself, but this seemed like it was trying to be more than just an over-noised mess of beats and bass. It actually sounds like you also had a good ear for melody, which a lot of earlier songs don't have.

Spline-1337 responds:

Thanks for your feedback! I will take into account all your wishes in my single, which will be released soon

Sounds like you used instruments from the CPS1。

Sure beats my shitty、choppy ass version。

lol, reminds me of that story Danny was telling Arin about on Game Grumps.

You're good、but I think you could use some advice。 You haven't much melody、but you're overflowing with potential。 If you need more inspiration、look up Mega Man 2 music theory。 It helped me a LOT over the years。

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